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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Richard Pearlman on March 31, 2014, 07:55:54 pm

Title: Local Swamp Golden Hour
Post by: Richard Pearlman on March 31, 2014, 07:55:54 pm

Comments and critiques are appreciated. What worked? What did not work? Thanks.

Title: Re: Local Swamp Golden Hour
Post by: BernardLanguillier on March 31, 2014, 08:16:17 pm

Since the sun start is where the eye goes first, I would say wrong lens/wrong aperture.

Besides, the overall color balance doesn't say golden hour, it may be better to keep your white balance closer to day light.

Compositionwise, it works for me.

Cheers,
Bernard

Title: Re: Local Swamp Golden Hour
Post by: Richard Pearlman on April 01, 2014, 08:42:22 am

Bernard, thank you for your comments. What do you mean by wrong lens/wrong aperture? I intended to take this shot with a wide angle and small aperture (for the sunburst). Why would you have chosen differently?