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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: churly on January 30, 2014, 11:13:15 am

Title: On Ice
Post by: churly on January 30, 2014, 11:13:15 am

A set from a day in the cold.

Ideas, comments for improvements appreciated.
Chuck

(http://churly.zenfolio.com/img/s8/v77/p557715151-4.jpg)


(http://churly.zenfolio.com/img/s11/v35/p832183987-4.jpg)


(http://churly.zenfolio.com/img/s2/v61/p858683216-4.jpg)

Title: Re: On Ice
Post by: NancyP on January 30, 2014, 12:01:00 pm

I like #1 the best. I would try cropping #1 and #2 considerably, to focus on the ice mound in the upper left corner, and see if you like it. Bushes detract from #2. #3 is a little too flat for my taste. YVMV.

Title: Re: On Ice
Post by: sdwilsonsct on January 30, 2014, 05:06:18 pm

For me, #3 is getting closest to interesting forms and abstraction. Try getting closer? Also, standing right over the subject gets it all in the same focal plane (if that's what you want!). Lastly, I prefer flat light for this kind of stuff, it seems so brittle and hard in sunlight.

Title: Re: On Ice
Post by: wolfnowl on January 30, 2014, 06:33:06 pm

I think #1 has potential, it's just... not sure... would have to play with it.  #2 I would crop vertically as I don't think the shrubs add anything to the image. #3 just serves to remind me that I've been through the ice seven times now (slow learner) and that it was very cold every time.  ::)

Mike.

Title: Re: On Ice
Post by: Paulo Bizarro on January 31, 2014, 06:55:57 am

For me #1 is the best, because it has the essential elements.

Title: Re: On Ice
Post by: churly on January 31, 2014, 03:16:00 pm

Thanks to everyone for your interesting and varied feedback.  It is much appreciated.

It is notable that the images that I have been finding interesting lately are somewhat off of the Lula norm.  I'm not sure what that means, if anything.  Most likely means that I need to get out more.  :)
Chuck

Title: Re: On Ice
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 31, 2014, 04:37:23 pm

Don't worry about anybody's "norm," Chuck! Just go for what interests you.
I think the variety of responses you got to these photos shows they've got something. Some of the suggestions may be worth playing with. Or they may not.

Title: Re: On Ice
Post by: churly on February 01, 2014, 11:15:22 am

Good advice Eric.  Thanks.
Chuck