Luminous Landscape Forum
Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: churly on December 20, 2013, 05:00:12 pm
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I realize this is predominantly a record shot but I thought some might enjoy this portrait of a storm.
Chuck
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Good title, great shot.
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I like it :-) … though I feel cheated out of some of the foreground.
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Belongs in a meteorology textbook - very clear demonstration of updraft etc. I like it. The storm is the subject, foreground isn't too important to me.
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The storm is the subject, foreground isn't too important to me.
Bedclothes do not, as a rule, detract from the lover. It's not that the foreground is important, but rather that its excision draws the eye wayward. The cloud needs a bit more visual padding to provide the proper repose for such magnificence. The too-close cropping both makes the subject too forward — literally — and unsettles at least this viewer, who was left wondering how long — in storeys — the tripod legs had to have been.
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I don't find this to be a "record shot" at all. To the contrary, it's a lovely weather photo. Sure, a touch more foreground might be nice but I'd be happy to have this in my portfolio as-is.
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It is much more than a record shot.
An absolute stunner in fact!
Tony Jay
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I don't know how big that file is, but I imagine it could work well as a large print, like 24" high.
Definitely more than "just a record shot".
Thanks for posting it.
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It is much more than a record shot.
An absolute stunner in fact!
Tony Jay
+1
Thierry
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Thanks to everyone for the comments.
I like it :-) … though I feel cheated out of some of the foreground.
That's why I referred to a record shot. The shot was made from a ridge that placed me above the immediate foreground and the distal foreground isn't very interesting. In fact, this shot was an afterthought as I was actually shooting into the light in the opposite direction.
Nancy - it is indeed pretty classic.
Chuck
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It is much more than a record shot.
An absolute stunner in fact!
Tony Jay
+1 - With more foreground and tonal values raised (especially in the min-tones), it would make a stunning landscape. Well seen and captured.
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Thanks for your thoughts Terry. I have had some success with both the tonality and the foreground as suggested.
Chuck