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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: William Walker on December 12, 2013, 02:23:23 pm

Title: Dayone - Take Two
Post by: William Walker on December 12, 2013, 02:23:23 pm

Another B&W Leopard portrait.

Your comments are always welcome.

William

Title: Re: Dayone - Take Two
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on December 12, 2013, 02:56:46 pm

Top Image !

Title: Re: Dayone - Take Two
Post by: Ed Blagden on December 12, 2013, 11:28:08 pm

Nice - much better than the first one.  I like the way he (or she?) is salivating, maybe thinking about eating the photographer!

You might want to look at darkening that background on the right and that little blob above its head.

Title: Re: Dayone - Take Two
Post by: dhancock on December 13, 2013, 06:18:57 pm

I agree! I like this one much better.