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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: batmura on November 15, 2013, 02:06:36 pm

Title: nowhere
Post by: batmura on November 15, 2013, 02:06:36 pm

(http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5550/10873774666_a1d2fefc2b_c.jpg) (http://www.flickr.com/photos/batmura/10873774666/)
nowhere (http://www.flickr.com/photos/batmura/10873774666/) by batmura (http://www.flickr.com/people/batmura/), on Flickr

Title: Re: nowhere
Post by: dhancock on November 15, 2013, 04:11:11 pm

You did a great job converting to greyscale, but your subject seems to lack interest - at least for me. The texture just isn't enough to draw me in.

Title: Re: nowhere
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on November 17, 2013, 04:54:44 am

I like it. I think I'd like it more if the structure sloping down to the water on the left weren't cut off, but I imagine you had your reasons.

Jeremy

Title: Re: nowhere
Post by: PhotoEcosse on November 17, 2013, 07:19:29 am

It looks like a structure with possibilities. Perhaps an angle that produced more reflections?

Title: Re: nowhere
Post by: Paulo Bizarro on November 18, 2013, 04:16:54 am

To me, it would work better if there was more space above, to allow the pier to breathe a bit more.