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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: mattpallante on November 02, 2013, 04:27:15 pm

Title: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
Post by: mattpallante on November 02, 2013, 04:27:15 pm

Not sure about this, what do you think?

Matt

Title: Re: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
Post by: mattpallante on November 02, 2013, 04:28:39 pm

Well, the image should help......................

Title: Re: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on November 02, 2013, 04:50:53 pm

I think you had a good subject and a good idea. The execution is somewhat lacking. The horizontal, centered flow of white water is rather static, compositionally speaking. Certain shades of green appear oversaturated as well.

Title: Re: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
Post by: luxborealis on November 02, 2013, 08:42:14 pm

I agree with Slobodan, and also find that this beautiful scene lacks a bit of context (background, foreground), but that might just be the landscape photographer in me speaking.

Title: Re: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
Post by: sdwilsonsct on November 03, 2013, 09:14:57 am

Lots of good elements.
I can imagine moving to the right, increasing focal length and trying to compose on the chute and surrounding rocks, putting the chute on the left. Worth revisiting.