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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: cjogo on October 01, 2013, 02:51:39 am

Title: Door to Church
Post by: cjogo on October 01, 2013, 02:51:39 am

Central Paris

Title: Re: Door to Church
Post by: brandtb on October 01, 2013, 08:54:19 am

Three zones of visual information:  left - receding pier/columns, middle - pier in shadow, right - door with top and bottom cut off.  Neither the left or the middle is that distinctive...very difficult to read the pier/columns because of the spacing, the middle zone is not really readable because of the darkness...but the door while simple is the interesting aspect with its panel framing and studs...BUT...it's cropped top and bottom. I wouldn't consider this such a successful shot of "architecture".

Title: Re: Door to Church
Post by: cjogo on October 01, 2013, 01:20:40 pm

Wished I could had moved the tripod back a little more  ..  this was not a SLR.    So just a the small viewfinder in the Hassy SWC....  A real ZONE test --  This was a -3 development to hold the detail in the door ....   As you explain  :: looks like more like three separate shots .