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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Riaan van Wyk on September 12, 2013, 01:18:52 pm

Title: 07/09/2013
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on September 12, 2013, 01:18:52 pm

Thoughts please?

Title: Re: 07/09/2013
Post by: RSL on September 12, 2013, 01:34:12 pm

Charybdis?

Title: Re: 07/09/2013
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on September 12, 2013, 01:48:15 pm

Very fine tonality and composition. Not sure of the whirlpool motion blur... either too much or not enough.

Title: Re: 07/09/2013
Post by: sdwilsonsct on September 12, 2013, 04:13:11 pm

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on September 12, 2013, 01:48:15 pm

Very fine tonality and composition. Not sure of the whirlpool motion blur... either too much or not enough.

+1, but I like the whirlpool.

Title: Re: 07/09/2013
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 12, 2013, 06:03:16 pm

I like it a lot, especially the whirlpool.
I do think I'd be tempted to crop (sorry, Russ) some off the bottom below the whirlpool, so that it is the main object of close interest.

Title: Re: 07/09/2013
Post by: wolfnowl on September 13, 2013, 01:42:21 am

Dizzying?

Title: Re: 07/09/2013
Post by: David Eckels on September 13, 2013, 09:10:47 am

Quote from: RSL on September 12, 2013, 01:34:12 pm

Charybdis?

...certainly not Scylla ;)

Title: Re: 07/09/2013
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on September 16, 2013, 12:14:04 pm

Nope, no monsters- just foam and bubbles. Thank you for looking.

Title: Re: 07/09/2013
Post by: Rob C on September 16, 2013, 12:20:59 pm

Quote from: David Eckels on September 13, 2013, 09:10:47 am

...certainly not Scylla ;)

Absolutely not! She's from Liverpool.

Rob C