Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Roberto Frieri on August 27, 2013, 08:02:15 am
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For your review.
I like this picture just because of the subject, my father in the mountains again after a long period of physical problems, but any suggestions for improve it, or comments, are welcome.
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This is a fine environmental portrait. I particularly like the composition that puts his head above the horizon line. I suppose I have a sentimental attraction to this as I too love the mountains.
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I too think this is very nice. If anything, I'd open up the shadows on his face. I need to get one like this of my dad!
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I agree with k.bennett.
Your father shows great determination and sense of satisfaction at being able to be up in the mountains, and the nice layering on the mountains is a treat. I wouldn't change a thing, except possibly what David suggests.
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That's a terrific photo, particularly given the subject matter! The mountains in the distance are lovely. Have you tried a bit less contrast?
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Very nice, Roberto. I agree with David, and I suspect that if you play with Peter's suggestion a bit you may find you don't need to dodge your dad very much. (Better not, anyway. He's liable to smack you.)
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This is superb shot even without considering the sentimental aspect.
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Thank you all for your comments.
This is a second version based on your suggestions.
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It's a bit better but the original was already a splendid image!
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Thank you all for your comments.
This is a second version based on your suggestions.
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For me, it's the whole dynamic of the upward movement which is showing great force, but not in an over-exertion context. There's vigor and purpose to the stride. Love the shot.
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Thanks again.