Luminous Landscape Forum
Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: sdwilsonsct on August 11, 2013, 04:17:58 am
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Suggestions welcome.
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Very compelling photograph. Nicely seen. Great lines and a perspective different that what we are used to seeing.
Suggestions:
- De-emphasize/darken/crop the top left bright area on the rock. To my eyes, the photo becomes a "tennis match" composition with my eye going back and forth between it and the cloud.
- Try raising slightly the values of the dark area near the edge of the rock. While there is a great edge to the black, offering a tiny glimpse into more of the black areas would perhaps give the photo additional depth
- Taking a little off the bottom would put the cloud even further off-centre. It's not in the centre, but it seems close enough to appear "lost" or "floating" (or perhaps that's your intention, it being a cloud and all!).
Great photograph to work with!
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very nice Scott
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It's gorgeous, and I think Terry's suggestions are right on the nose.
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Very well seen! I too agree with Terry's suggestions.
Jeremy
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Many thanks, Terry, Bob, Eric and Jeremy.
I appreciate the editorial suggestions, Terry, because I was uncertain what to do with this, it being different from a regular landscape. Here's a revised version.
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Many thanks, Terry, Bob, Eric and Jeremy.
I appreciate the editorial suggestions, Terry, because I was uncertain what to do with this, it being different from a regular landscape. Here's a revised version.
If I'd seen that version first, Scott, I'd have liked it; but I think it's nowhere near as good as your first attempt. Why not give Terry's suggestions a try?
Jeremy
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Why not give Terry's suggestions a try?
I did! 1, 2, 3. :D
Too subtle, I guess.
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Very compelling photograph. Nicely seen. Great lines and a perspective different that what we are used to seeing.
Suggestions:
- De-emphasize/darken/crop the top left bright area on the rock. To my eyes, the photo becomes a "tennis match" composition with my eye going back and forth between it and the cloud.
- Try raising slightly the values of the dark area near the edge of the rock. While there is a great edge to the black, offering a tiny glimpse into more of the black areas would perhaps give the photo additional depth
- Taking a little off the bottom would put the cloud even further off-centre. It's not in the centre, but it seems close enough to appear "lost" or "floating" (or perhaps that's your intention, it being a cloud and all!).
Great photograph to work with!
Of Terry's first suggestion you chose the easy way out: to crop. I would prefer to see those lighter rocks simply darkened, and save the cropping for the bottom.
Here's my (quick) interpretation of what Terry suggested:
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Of Terry's first suggestion you chose the easy way out: to crop. I would prefer to see those lighter rocks simply darkened, and save the cropping for the bottom.
Here's my (quick) interpretation of what Terry suggested:
Eric,
I agree. Much stronger.
Scott, lovely photo. Love the submerged rocks below the cloud - that "makes" the composition for me.
Rand
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Great image, Scott. I also wanted to see the TL darkened a bit to reduce competition, but I wanted to keep the blue in there as much as possible. Since everyone gets an opinion and trusting you wouldn't mind, I popped it into LR and did a 30-second edit. I added a graduated filter to the top, dropping exposure way down but increasing saturation. I cropped it to 16x9, removing some of the foreground rocks, and I added a second GF to the bottom, reducing exposure by 0.5 stops to 'anchor' the bottom.
Mike.
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I did! 1, 2, 3. :D
Too subtle, I guess.
My apologies: I'd not remembered when I posted that Terry had included cropping in his suggestions of how to deal with the top. I think, with due respect to him, that that's a mistake: it's much better, if a little trickier, to darken the bright area, so it doesn't attract attention. If you crop it, his suggestion (which I do like) of a small crop at the bottom to bring the cloud lower in the photo is defeated.
Eric's and Mike's versions are more what I had in mind. FWIW, I find Mike's a little too dark.
Jeremy
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If you crop it, his suggestion (which I do like) of a small crop at the bottom to bring the cloud lower in the photo is defeated.
OK -- I get it now, and agree.
FWIW I did try darkening instead of cropping even before posting the first version. I appreciate all the feedback and examples, and will keep thinking.
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Well seen and photographed.