Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: MattNQ on May 22, 2013, 11:22:06 pm
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A few shots of an interesting local church up close and personal
Couple of extreme angles, which I think kind of suits the subject windows - although looking at them together gets a bit much ::)
(http://mattlarsen.smugmug.com/MonochromeMagic/Light-and-Dark/i-GChHMpR/0/L/P4129237_editmod2-L.jpg)
(http://mattlarsen.smugmug.com/MonochromeMagic/Light-and-Dark/i-mDRLFRx/0/L/P4129250_editmod1-L.jpg)
(http://mattlarsen.smugmug.com/MonochromeMagic/Light-and-Dark/i-6zSL3dw/0/L/P4129244_editmod1-L.jpg)
(http://mattlarsen.smugmug.com/MonochromeMagic/Light-and-Dark/i-TNHPwKH/0/L/P4129236_editmod1-L.jpg)
Any thoughts? too overprocessed? Angles too dramatic?
Shot around middayish. Does the backlighting from the sun add or detract ?
Fire away (I have my flak jacket on ;D)
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A few shots of an interesting local church up close and personal
Couple of extreme angles, which I think kind of suits the subject windows - although looking at them together gets a bit much ::)
Any thoughts? too overprocessed? Angles too dramatic?
Shot around middayish. Does the backlighting from the sun add or detract ?
Fire away (I have my flak jacket on ;D)
building itself - looks lke odd burning in.
Maybe you answered your own question.
I don't see anything amiss with the angles - drama is good. Where I think you lose it a bit is in the pure white areas next to the building itself - looks like odd burning in, and spoils it a bit for me.
Rob C
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+1. The clouds are way over-zapped.
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Thank you gents for the feedback.
I used a GND to attempt to reign in the sky, but probably still too much backlight.
Probably more work on the RAWs I can improve the sky, but the easier option might be to re-shoot when the sun is lower ;D