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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RSL on January 24, 2013, 10:34:06 am

Title: Pull
Post by: RSL on January 24, 2013, 10:34:06 am

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Title: Re: Pull
Post by: amolitor on January 25, 2013, 07:08:47 am

So I see a little visual pun in there, and a not completely unpleasing arrangement of shapes? Too much reflection relative to visibility-through to my taste, and while I like the reflected barrel, I don't much like the actual barrel.

More to the point, though, there's no there, there, in this one. It's a visual pun and that's about it. No story, no ambiguity, and not even anything particularly attractive to look at.

It doesn't work for me.

Title: Re: Pull
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 25, 2013, 09:03:24 am

Yes, it's a visual pun, but it also seems to me to have plenty of ambiguity. Enough so I keep coming back to it and picking at it to see what's there.