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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on January 19, 2013, 07:16:46 am

Title: roller
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on January 19, 2013, 07:16:46 am

Any more than just quaint?

Jeremy

Title: Re: roller
Post by: Tony Jay on January 19, 2013, 07:33:49 am

Jeremy, would you consider vignetting this image to a degree to focus attention on the subject a bit more effectively?

Tony Jay

Title: Re: roller
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on January 19, 2013, 12:29:54 pm

Quote from: Tony Jay on January 19, 2013, 07:33:49 am

Jeremy, would you consider vignetting this image to a degree to focus attention on the subject a bit more effectively?

I would! Now you mention it, I'm slightly emabarrassed that I didn't think of it myself.

Jeremy

Title: Re: roller
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 19, 2013, 06:29:06 pm

It's a charmer. I like the fact that the shadows are so much wider than the roller frame (because you photographed them edge on.)

I agree that some vignetting is worth a try.

Title: Re: roller
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on January 20, 2013, 11:05:13 am

Something like this, perhaps? I've added a bit of grain as well as a vignette.

Jeremy