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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Syncopation on November 28, 2012, 07:00:05 am

Title: Cock Fighting Documentary - Feedback Required
Post by: Syncopation on November 28, 2012, 07:00:05 am

Below is a link to a short documentary about cock fighting that I've put together using still images and text slides.

It's my first attempt at trying something like this so I'd appreciate any comments you have regarding content and format, in particular whether you think the images should be B&W, colour or a mixture of both.

https://vimeo.com/54431639

Title: Re: Cock Fighting Documentary - Feedback Required
Post by: Jim Pascoe on November 28, 2012, 10:46:38 am

Great set of pictures.  My feeling is that the text at the start is too long, and that possibly some sort of soundtrack would liven up the feel a bit.

Jim