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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Simon DeSantis on April 17, 2012, 10:22:04 am

Title: Ceder Hill Cemetary, Hartford CT
Post by: Simon DeSantis on April 17, 2012, 10:22:04 am

Pentax 67 with 55mm lens on ISO 400 tri-x. Hand held.

Title: Re: Ceder Hill Cemetary, Hartford CT
Post by: Michael H. Cothran on April 17, 2012, 10:46:45 am

Generally speaking, this image has a lot of impact, plus it displays some good processing.
My only nit is that the "main" subject, which appears to me to be the statue with the arm raised, is too close the to tall monument behind her. I think a little more distance between them is necessary. Otherwise, very nice.

Title: Re: Ceder Hill Cemetary, Hartford CT
Post by: Simon DeSantis on April 17, 2012, 06:15:22 pm

Thank you. I think you're right about the placement of the obelisk. Maybe I'll go back and reshoot it a few steps to the right.

Title: Re: Ceder Hill Cemetary, Hartford CT
Post by: Tony Jay on April 17, 2012, 06:23:53 pm

Hi Simon

I do agree with Michael here.
I can't wait to see the result of another slightly different composition.

Regards

Tony Jay