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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on March 11, 2011, 12:06:50 pm

Title: A walk in the park
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on March 11, 2011, 12:06:50 pm

For an hour or so I took a walk in the park today ....

These are also a little riddle for Slobodan about the use of clarity ... ;)

Title: Re: A walk in the park
Post by: RSL on March 11, 2011, 02:09:59 pm

Christoph, I like them all. I'm especially fond of the midtones in the B&Ws. Very nice.

Title: Re: A walk in the park
Post by: wolfnowl on March 11, 2011, 03:15:24 pm

Nicely done.  I prefer the first of the three; with the third one I found myself wondering if it was possible to reframe to remove the lamp post... but you may have wanted to include it for your own reasons.

Mike.

Title: Re: A walk in the park
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on March 11, 2011, 03:50:34 pm

Maybe it was a lucky morning.
Here are some more from the same walk ...
(No - not my dogs - just a lady with some friends or customers pets.
She didn't sign a model release, but allowed me to take the image)

Title: Re: A walk in the park
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on March 11, 2011, 05:34:28 pm

Quote from: Christoph C. Feldhaim on March 11, 2011, 12:06:50 pm

For an hour or so I took a walk in the park today ....
These are also a little riddle for Slobodan about the use of clarity ... ;)

There's all good but I particularly like the toning on the last of the three.

Jeremy

Title: Re: A walk in the park
Post by: wolfnowl on March 12, 2011, 01:15:25 am

I like the toning, but unless the planetarium is pointed toward a specific constellation, I'd straighten it.   ;)

Mike.

Title: Re: A walk in the park
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on March 12, 2011, 06:59:45 am

Actually I think I'll re-take it.
I hate to see I cut the top of it.

Title: Re: A walk in the park
Post by: EduPerez on March 14, 2011, 04:09:24 am

Quote from: kikashi on March 11, 2011, 05:34:28 pm

There's all good but I particularly like the toning on the last of the three.

Jeremy

+1

Title: Re: A walk in the park
Post by: popnfresh on March 14, 2011, 12:19:05 pm

I really like them all. But the sepia toned image with the woman in the foreground just knocks my socks off. There's a classical beauty to your work. Well done!