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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: deeyas on September 12, 2009, 05:03:22 pm

Title: Splash!
Post by: deeyas on September 12, 2009, 05:03:22 pm

Enjoying the last few warm afternoons! C&C welcome.

(http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2439/3913639070_43f5d46fd3_b.jpg)

(http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2435/3912720951_8ed9605b31_b.jpg)

Title: Splash!
Post by: RSL on September 13, 2009, 12:15:33 pm

Sayeed, Both are interesting, but I think you need more context in both -- especially the first, where the background needs to be in focus. Once you've seen the first shot the second shot makes sense, but standing alone it doesn't make sense.

Keep it up, though. This kind of thing sure beats fuzzy pictures of birds and flowers.