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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: ARD on May 03, 2009, 05:28:47 pm

Title: One Year Old
Post by: ARD on May 03, 2009, 05:28:47 pm

(http://i39.tinypic.com/vr5vsk.jpg)

(http://i41.tinypic.com/2r5dq51.jpg)

Couple of B&W conversions

All C&C welcome

Many thanks

Title: One Year Old
Post by: AndrewKulin on May 03, 2009, 06:10:11 pm

I love the first one.  The second one, the dark side of the child's face could in my opinion use some brightening.  This area was also noticeably posterized on my monitor, though that could be an artifact of reducing the original photo down to a jpeg to post here.

Andrew

Title: One Year Old
Post by: dalethorn on May 03, 2009, 10:16:38 pm

Yep the first one's great, and the second could be the phantom kid of the opera with that posterization.

Title: One Year Old
Post by: wolfnowl on May 04, 2009, 02:10:25 am

Love the first one too.  My grandson just turned a year old and my great nephew turns a year old next week.

Mike.

Title: One Year Old
Post by: ARD on May 04, 2009, 10:05:33 am

Quote from: dalethorn

Yep the first one's great, and the second could be the phantom kid of the opera with that posterization.

LOL - I see what you mean

Thanks for all the replies

Had a bit of a re-work of the phantom shot

(http://i44.tinypic.com/n33x5i.jpg)

Title: One Year Old
Post by: francois on May 04, 2009, 10:11:47 am

Quote from: ARD

LOL - I see what you mean

Thanks for all the replies

Had a bit of a re-work of the phantom shot

(http://i44.tinypic.com/n33x5i.jpg)

This one is indeed much better. I love the first one.