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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on March 02, 2009, 06:24:45 pm

Title: Bridge
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on March 02, 2009, 06:24:45 pm

Any good?

Jeremy

[attachment=11867:footbridge.jpg]

Title: Bridge
Post by: Josh-H on March 02, 2009, 06:35:12 pm

Not bad - but to give some constructive criticism I find the close out of focus areas of the bridge somewhat distracting. They draw my eye  away from the focal point of the bridge leading off into the distance.

I like the composition.

Title: Bridge
Post by: dalethorn on March 02, 2009, 10:56:26 pm

For me, the whiteness is so dominant that it's what drew my eye. A different tonal balance might yield up more of the detail.