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The Art of Photography => Landscape Showcase => Topic started by: RSL on November 23, 2024, 11:25:50 am

Title: Woodstork Airborne
Post by: RSL on November 23, 2024, 11:25:50 am

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Title: Re: Woodstork Airborne
Post by: francois on November 28, 2024, 06:21:16 am

The frame is perfectly filled with diagonals (body & wings)… Superb photo.

Title: Re: Woodstork Airborne
Post by: UnfamiliarLight on December 05, 2024, 10:33:42 am

I like the graphic element of the diagonals but there are a couple of issues. One the bird has no where to go and there is a lot of negative space behind it. I see the tension between getting the wings filling the frame but I"m not sure it works. The wings are not sharp. I don't think they *need* to be but they should either be sharp or have obvious motion blur.

Title: Re: Woodstork Airborne
Post by: RSL on December 05, 2024, 02:39:01 pm

Thanks, Unfamiliar. I don't see a woodstork very often, and catching one is unusual.