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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Mark Nadler on April 21, 2024, 10:32:28 pm

Title: Beached Ship, Tierra del Fuego
Post by: Mark Nadler on April 21, 2024, 10:32:28 pm

Comments welcomed.

mark

Title: Re: Beached Ship, Tierra del Fuego
Post by: degrub on April 22, 2024, 09:22:17 am

Nice framing. Lonely place.
Did you capture any of the rust patterns close up ? might be a good abstract.

Title: Re: Beached Ship, Tierra del Fuego
Post by: Mark Nadler on April 23, 2024, 09:13:23 am

degrub, thanks for your comments.  I have reached my allowable lifetime number of rust pictures.  But yes, the rust on this ship was awesome.

mark

Title: Re: Beached Ship, Tierra del Fuego
Post by: UnfamiliarLight on April 24, 2024, 09:46:10 am

Nice composition. I do find the tracks in the sand on the far left distracting and I do like the person for scale but they are a bit small. Having them half way closer and looking up at the ship would probably be better.

Title: Re: Beached Ship, Tierra del Fuego
Post by: Mark Nadler on April 24, 2024, 10:02:25 am

UnfamilarLight, I agree with both comments.  Thanks for commenting.

mark

Title: Re: Beached Ship, Tierra del Fuego
Post by: francois on April 25, 2024, 06:26:25 am

I like it a lot and the empt sky (without cloud) makes it even more like a lonely, abandoned ship.
Well done.

Title: Re: Beached Ship, Tierra del Fuego
Post by: Michael West on April 26, 2024, 08:32:27 pm

Quote from: Mark Nadler on April 21, 2024, 10:32:28 pm

Comments welcomed.

mark

 I like it.

Title: Re: Beached Ship, Tierra del Fuego
Post by: Mark Nadler on April 29, 2024, 01:31:40 pm

francois and West, thanks for your comments.

mark