Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: David Eckels on January 20, 2024, 10:17:33 am
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...still standing ::)
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David,
I enjoy the way you break the rules and used the crop and aspect ratio to meld with the in-focus, subject tree. My experience is that it creates two clearly defined layers/planes in the image; front and back. Then I get to ponder what you are saying about the space between the two and... become more conscious of the in-fill I would write. -I wish I could see the print. The internet is great but fails in comparison to the tactile physical object; I guess it is an exchange of impact for reach.
I'd love to know one of the stories YOU are telling with this if you'd care to elaborate and share it..
-/t
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I have several images from this section of Rialto Beach, the dark forest behind, scattered light colored driftwood all over at the edge of the forest. I thought it kind of a harbinger of things to come. But there stood this rather priapic snag, old but "Still Standing" and it posed a symbolic moment for me at this time in life; that and my un-redeemed sense of humor. Nevertheless, its origins are evident in the background; its destiny inevitable and hinted at its base. I realize I could have included more of the forest and more of the fallen driftwood, but I had to work for it so I guess the viewer should too. And with such an "explicit" photo, perhaps I thought a little subtlety, or innuendo is better and might be intriguing.
Thanks for your comment, Todd, glad you like it.
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This is very good, not sure I would have gone with that post processing myself but it's a valid artistic choice and the composition is very good.
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Yes, many choices, but thank you Armand