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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Todd Suttles on January 07, 2023, 06:22:21 pm

Title: Between Number Eleven
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 07, 2023, 06:22:21 pm
In The Between, a new project I have started.

Project Statement: https://www.toddsuttles.com/in-the-between-portfolio

C&C appreciated
Title: Re: Between Number Fourteen
Post by: petermfiore on January 08, 2023, 06:29:05 am
I like this very much Todd. More?

Peter
Title: Re: Between Number Fourteen
Post by: Bob_B on January 08, 2023, 07:25:04 am
Me too = like and more, please
Title: Re: Between Number Fourteen
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on January 08, 2023, 07:39:57 am
The image on the left in itself is an evocative photo.
Title: Re: Between Number Fourteen
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 09, 2023, 09:16:53 am
I like this very much Todd. More?

Peter
Me too = like and more, please
The image on the left in itself is an evocative photo.
Thank you, I am still editing which is finished, not finished, in, or out. I am at a soft 18 so far, so I greatly appreciate unbiased, objective reactions. Seeing my "children" as they are is still a great challenge/weakness.
Rajan, thank you. One of the criteria I have set, prior to the pairing of images, is that each must be able to stand alone, or I can't use it. It is still a grey area in my mind what exactly that means. And I know one of the two will always be "more" of "that" than the other, but as it stands now, each must evoke a clear something (to me) using the language of metaphor, analogy, or symbology. The project is about the gap, the difference, created between the two. Also, physically, I am using size, color, placement within the frame, and the physical space between the images to manipulate that contrast, as if I were laying images out on pages in a book.

Probably more than you wanted to know, but explaining it COLD helps me to decide and define it. Thanks in advance for your indulgence.
Title: Re: Between Number Fourteen
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 09, 2023, 09:21:53 am
I will trickle in the images I currently believe to be "IN" the project. This one is Between Number Three. Thanks in advance to anyone willing to help me with these, -/t
Title: Re: Between Number Fourteen
Post by: degrub on January 09, 2023, 09:27:47 pm
needs an axe and an arrow  ;)
Title: Re: Between Number Fourteen
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 10, 2023, 08:59:51 am
LOL ;D  Exactly!
Title: Re: Between Number Fourteen
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 10, 2023, 09:14:28 am
This is Between Number Sixteen