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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: PeterAit on November 27, 2021, 10:21:04 am

Title: Spiral staircase
Post by: PeterAit on November 27, 2021, 10:21:04 am: Taken somewhere in Cuba, a perfect subject for monochrome.
Title: Re: Spiral staircase
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on November 27, 2021, 01:27:32 pm: Works for me.
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Post by: Chris Kern on November 27, 2021, 04:33:35 pm: Quote from: PeterAit on November 27, 2021, 10:21:04 am
Taken somewhere in Cuba, a perfect subject for monochrome.

Very nice. I'd be tempted to try abstracting the image even further by making the background a uniform white.
Title: Re: Spiral staircase
Post by: Bob_B on November 28, 2021, 06:38:08 am: Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on November 27, 2021, 01:27:32 pm
Works for me.
+1
Title: Re: Spiral staircase
Post by: PeterAit on November 28, 2021, 03:43:20 pm: Quote from: Chris Kern on November 27, 2021, 04:33:35 pm
Very nice. I'd be tempted to try abstracting the image even further by making the background a uniform white.

Good idea!
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Post by: John R on November 28, 2021, 04:25:56 pm: Well seen. It has a lot of impact with the high contrast white background.

JR
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Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on November 28, 2021, 04:28:33 pm: Yes. Big improvement.
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Post by: kers on November 28, 2021, 05:09:14 pm: very elegant staircase... worth the photo !
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Post by: Mark Nadler on November 28, 2021, 07:35:31 pm: good one. I like the abstract version.

mark
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Post by: francois on November 29, 2021, 03:51:27 am: The last version is superb, it eliminates every possible distraction.