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Site & Board Matters => Article Discussions => Topic started by: BradSmith on January 25, 2021, 03:33:53 pm
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Dan, I hope you and or Josh take this as constructive rather than negative criticism. I offer it as a 13 year Lula veteran.
I think that your articles are much too long and therefore, difficult for readers to find what they might be interested in. I believe you need to become much more succinct or have strong editing do that for you. And as organization goes, you need to put in section headings/titles to aid the reader. I just read your "Year in Review - Cameras" article. Nearly 7800 words and 60 paragraphs. It was an article that cried-out for headings. In this case, camera brands seemed logical.
If your Divinity Studies are ever going to lead to sermons, you've got to tighten it up.
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Dan, I hope you and or Josh take this as constructive rather than negative criticism. I offer it as a 13 year Lula veteran.
I think that your articles are much too long and therefore, difficult for readers to find what they might be interested in. I believe you need to become much more succinct or have strong editing do that for you. And as organization goes, you need to put in section headings/titles to aid the reader. I just read your "Year in Review - Cameras" article. Nearly 7800 words and 60 paragraphs. It was an article that cried-out for headings. In this case, camera brands seemed logical.
If your Divinity Studies are ever going to lead to sermons, you've got to tighten it up.
I agree with the spirit, intent and fact in BradSmith's post.
More concision, please.
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Suggestions noted for more concise and broken down pieces.
Thanks gentlemen.
J