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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on November 11, 2020, 01:58:18 pm

Title: stream
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on November 11, 2020, 01:58:18 pm

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Jeremy

Title: Re: stream
Post by: degrub on November 11, 2020, 02:05:44 pm

Lovely setting.
It is more appealing to me if i stop the frame just below the algae on the right hand foreground rock.
i find the boiling water foreground ( and colour) distracting from the pleasant scene since my eye wants to rest near the bridge.

Title: Re: stream
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on November 11, 2020, 03:14:22 pm

I partially agree with Degrub.
My preference would include just a little of the frothy water just below the waterfalls, perhaps a tiny bit lower than he suggested.