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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Rajan Parrikar on November 04, 2020, 01:41:34 pm

Title: Football Practice
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on November 04, 2020, 01:41:34 pm

Football Practice. (https://blog.parrikar.com/2020/11/04/football-practice/)

Title: Re: Football Practice
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on November 04, 2020, 01:43:25 pm

Good light. Possibly a little too tightly cropped at the top?

Jeremy

Title: Re: Football Practice
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on November 04, 2020, 01:48:22 pm

Quote from: Jeremy Roussak on November 04, 2020, 01:43:25 pm

Good light. Possibly a little too tightly cropped at the top?

Jeremy

I wanted to eliminate the background fence, see here in full.

Title: Re: Football Practice
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on November 04, 2020, 02:01:56 pm

Yes. I rather suspected you'd done it to cut out something undesirable.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Football Practice
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on November 04, 2020, 03:41:27 pm

After taking into account Jeremy's point, I have now extended the frame (and replaced the image above) to make the crop less tight.

Title: Re: Football Practice
Post by: RSL on November 04, 2020, 07:37:49 pm

The first crop is fine, Rajan. A fine shot.