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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on June 18, 2020, 11:32:08 am

Title: icy curves
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on June 18, 2020, 11:32:08 am

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Jeremy

Title: Re: icy curves
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 18, 2020, 10:35:39 pm

I like it.

But I would be tempted to clone out the dark stuff in the lower middle, so the sweep of the two upper figures dominates more.

Title: Re: icy curves
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on June 24, 2020, 05:23:24 pm

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 18, 2020, 10:35:39 pm

But I would be tempted to clone out the dark stuff in the lower middle, so the sweep of the two upper figures dominates more.

Something like this?

Jeremy

Title: Re: icy curves
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 24, 2020, 05:50:45 pm

Yes!

That is perfect for me. But it's your photo, so your preference is paramount.

Title: Re: icy curves
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on June 25, 2020, 05:54:55 am

Yes (to both versions)!

Sufficiently abstract. An eye. Octopus. Well done compositionally.

Nitpicking: grayish.

Title: Re: icy curves
Post by: francois on June 25, 2020, 09:29:42 am

Quote from: Jeremy Roussak on June 24, 2020, 05:23:24 pm

Something like this?

Jeremy

A lot cleaner. I like it that way.

Title: Re: icy curves
Post by: churly on June 25, 2020, 09:40:58 am

I prefer the 2nd as well.

Title: Re: icy curves
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on June 25, 2020, 02:07:37 pm

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on June 25, 2020, 05:54:55 am

Nitpicking: grayish.

Now you mention it, you're right.

Jeremy

Title: Re: icy curves
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 25, 2020, 02:22:12 pm

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on June 25, 2020, 05:54:55 am

Nitpicking: grayish.

I agree.
When Slobodan picks nits, it's worth paying attention.