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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on April 26, 2020, 01:20:36 pm

Title: patterns…
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on April 26, 2020, 01:20:36 pm: …in the ice.

Jeremy
Title: Re: patterns…
Post by: RSL on April 26, 2020, 03:04:13 pm: Lovely, Jeremy. Real abstracts.
Title: Re: patterns…
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on April 26, 2020, 05:45:27 pm: Both are very nice. The first is my favorite. I think the sharp edges add something.
Title: Re: patterns…
Post by: James Clark on April 26, 2020, 06:24:02 pm: Quote from: RSL on April 26, 2020, 03:04:13 pm
Lovely, Jeremy. Real abstracts.

As opposed to?
Title: Re: patterns…
Post by: James Clark on April 26, 2020, 06:24:36 pm: Quote from: Jeremy Roussak on April 26, 2020, 01:20:36 pm
…in the ice.

Jeremy

Love the color and tones. Like Eric, I prefer the first. The hole in the second is too dominating for me.
Title: Re: patterns…
Post by: John R on April 26, 2020, 07:11:08 pm: Quote from: James Clark on April 26, 2020, 06:24:36 pm
Love the color and tones. Like Eric, I prefer the first. The hole in the second is too dominating for me.
Agree. And it flows better is more variegated in tones, lines and shapes.

JR
Title: Re: patterns…
Post by: RSL on April 26, 2020, 07:48:43 pm: Quote from: James Clark on April 26, 2020, 06:24:02 pm
As opposed to?

Obviously, as opposed to unreal abstracts, James.
Title: Re: patterns…
Post by: armand on April 26, 2020, 09:44:08 pm: Quote from: James Clark on April 26, 2020, 06:24:36 pm
Love the color and tones. Like Eric, I prefer the first. The hole in the second is too dominating for me.

I prefer the first too. There is something off regarding the second that I can't put my finger on.