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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on March 08, 2020, 03:01:59 pm

Title: cave
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on March 08, 2020, 03:01:59 pm

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Jeremy

Title: Re: cave
Post by: armand on March 08, 2020, 03:22:48 pm

Looks good, I like it. Consider slightly darkening the darker part of the cave and see how you like it.

Title: Re: cave
Post by: francois on March 08, 2020, 04:00:19 pm

Nice maybe with some more contrast or like Armand suggested above (darkening). Shape, lines and colors are pleasant.

Title: Re: cave
Post by: kers on March 08, 2020, 06:58:41 pm

Quote from: francois on March 08, 2020, 04:00:19 pm

Nice maybe with some more contrast or like Armand suggested above (darkening). Shape, lines and colors are pleasant.

+1

the blue cave can be darker ( without loss)+ a bit more contrast/sharper; i come to this:

( there is a problem with the colourspace: sRGB is weak with turquoise; adbo RGB or PrpPhoto makes a huge difference.

Title: Re: cave
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on March 08, 2020, 07:20:38 pm

Yes, Pieter: nice touch. I'll play with it a little more.

Jeremy

Title: Re: cave
Post by: RSL on March 08, 2020, 08:51:12 pm

Stay out of that cave, Jeremy.

Title: Re: cave
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on March 10, 2020, 11:19:43 am

Beautiful, Jeremy.
And I look forward to seeing your "improved" versions.

Title: Re: cave
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on March 10, 2020, 03:09:16 pm

Slight reworking. Color Efex Pro detail extractor and a  few fiddles.

Jeremy

Title: Re: cave
Post by: Rob C on March 10, 2020, 03:49:45 pm

Sadly, I can't see all three up on the little iPad at the same time. Switching from one to the other as I have to, the differences become pretty much invisible at thumbnail size.

Title: Re: cave
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on March 11, 2020, 12:17:55 am

All I can say is: This one looks very good to me and I'm not tempted to change a thing.

-Eric