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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: armand on February 11, 2020, 01:09:35 pm

Title: Untitled
Post by: armand on February 11, 2020, 01:09:35 pm

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Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: degrub on February 15, 2020, 10:35:13 am

Interesting theme. Keystone maybe ?

Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: armand on February 18, 2020, 09:45:09 am

Quote from: degrub on February 15, 2020, 10:35:13 am

Interesting theme. Keystone maybe ?

Are you referring to correcting for keystone? Both are, the first only partially because I would lose too much of it if I did 100%.

Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: degrub on February 18, 2020, 09:53:15 am

yes.
In the second image, it is visually unsettling to me with the Left vertical and the right evident with the strong verticals.
In the first, the right is forgiving due to the extra space (they both look to be corrected about the same), but the left is strongly evident due to the cut off of the balconies.

It can still work as is, just not to my taste. Maybe as series.

Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: armand on February 18, 2020, 10:36:28 am

Quote from: degrub on February 18, 2020, 09:53:15 am

yes.
In the second image, it is visually unsettling to me with the Left vertical and the right evident with the strong verticals.
In the first, the right is forgiving due to the extra space (they both look to be corrected about the same), but the left is strongly evident due to the cut off of the balconies.

It can still work as is, just not to my taste. Maybe as series.

Ok, I got it now. Thanks. I didn't realize the left was still crooked, I placed the vertical correction lines closer to the center of the image.
Here is one processed with a little more care and a different crop.