Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RBFritz on October 14, 2019, 03:52:58 pm
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One of several falls on the east fork. Taken early morning deep in the canyon.Thoughts?
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I imagine you meant for it to be somewhat dark but it seems overly dark on my screen.
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Matt,I did intend for it to be dark. There is some small amount of detail in the dark areas but I didn't want too much. I use a spyder calibrated BenQ 27 monitor, if that helps. Sometimes I wonder too if what I see is too dark compared to what others see. Should I lighten it a bit for better critiquing?
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It's also very dark on my monitor but I like it. Try to submit a slightly lighter version so we can compare.
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Great subject, composition, along with the general "feeling/atmoshphere" - along with the deep "blacks". That said, I think they can be deep but not crushed - a good deal of those areas "appear to be" crushed though. I think you can get deep deep blacks without blowing it out to no detail and I think this would be a better direction to go. This is a very subtle change to be clear.
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Another file of the same image. Not as under exposed as the last one I used. Better?
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OOPS
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Woke up in the middle of the night almost a week after getting back and realized I had shot everything in JPG. Dang!!
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Woke up in the middle of the night almost a week after getting back and realized I had shot everything in JPG. Dang!!
I thought I was the only one who did that from time to time.
As for the images, I much prefer the dark, moody, mysterioso first version, even though I, too, at first thought it was a bit too dark.