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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Todd Suttles on September 13, 2019, 11:38:02 am

Title: Big
Post by: Todd Suttles on September 13, 2019, 11:38:02 am

Which came first?  :)
C&C appreciated

Title: Re: Big
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on September 13, 2019, 12:36:10 pm

Nice framing and composition. If it were mine, I would tame the highlights in the building a bit, to recover detail.

Title: Re: Big
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on September 13, 2019, 01:10:56 pm

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on September 13, 2019, 12:36:10 pm

Nice framing and composition. If it were mine, I would tame the highlights in the building a bit, to recover detail.

I agree: recover detail and avoid its drawing the eye. It's sufficiently bright to be the centre of attention, which I suspect isn't your intention.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Big
Post by: Todd Suttles on September 18, 2019, 03:42:55 pm

thank you. Enough?
I like it better

Title: Re: Big
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 18, 2019, 05:31:59 pm

Much better.