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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Andres Bonilla on August 28, 2019, 01:28:02 pm

Title: After La Siesta
Post by: Andres Bonilla on August 28, 2019, 01:28:02 pm

Vedado, Cuba

Title: Re: After La Siesta
Post by: RSL on August 28, 2019, 01:30:43 pm

Very good, Andres.

Title: Re: After La Siesta
Post by: Andres Bonilla on August 28, 2019, 01:40:02 pm

Thanks!! Please look at my previous post and tell me what you see. I asked Francois the same question.

Title: Re: After La Siesta
Post by: RSL on August 28, 2019, 01:47:25 pm

I see a frame that needs work. The shot is interesting, but the person inside the window is so obscured by the low brightness level that the effect -- at least on me -- is lost. I'd ask Slobodan what he suggests to overcome the problem.

Title: Re: After La Siesta
Post by: Andres Bonilla on August 28, 2019, 02:26:25 pm

Thanks, I work on the image a bit, what do you think?

Title: Re: After La Siesta
Post by: RSL on August 28, 2019, 02:33:20 pm

Much better.

Title: Re: After La Siesta
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on August 28, 2019, 05:35:51 pm

Quote from: RSL on August 28, 2019, 02:33:20 pm

Much better.

Yes!