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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RSL on April 28, 2018, 12:12:45 pm

Title: Crack of Dawn out my window
Post by: RSL on April 28, 2018, 12:12:45 pm

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Title: Re: Crack of Dawn out my window
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on April 28, 2018, 12:18:08 pm

Lovely scene, Russ, like a tapestry.

On the critique side, seems to me you killed the highlights in the sky a bit too much, turning them gray. Let them be, it would add to the sense of the impending brightness of the day.

Title: Re: Crack of Dawn out my window
Post by: Ivo_B on April 28, 2018, 12:25:48 pm

Ha!

Men could expect Kirsten Dunst walking across the scenery!! (Lars Von Trier, Melancholia)

Title: Re: Crack of Dawn out my window
Post by: RSL on April 29, 2018, 08:03:03 am

Thanks, Ivo. And Slobodan, you're probably right, but the sky was dominating the thing.