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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on March 27, 2018, 01:35:32 pm

Title: a few twigs
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on March 27, 2018, 01:35:32 pm

Thoughts?

Jeremy

Title: Re: a few twigs
Post by: LesPalenik on March 27, 2018, 04:09:05 pm

I've seen many pictures of a similar hair style, but it was a man.

Title: Re: a few twigs
Post by: John R on March 27, 2018, 06:33:08 pm

I think the image is too static. The person coupled with the orange dress is very powerful and is right in the centre with nothing to propel the person or the eye in moving forward. Try a crop on the left just past the cow, it helps the person appear to be more dynamic as she moves into the right of the frame. Despite not seeing her face, it is still a good cultural image.

JR

Title: Re: a few twigs
Post by: jkrumm on April 02, 2018, 09:40:19 am

It seems like it might work in a series, like as part of a report on an area, more than a stand alone image. The colors look nice to me.

Title: Re: a few twigs
Post by: RSL on April 02, 2018, 09:52:15 am

Good shooting, Jeremy. It's refreshing to see a photograph with a person in it, doing something interesting instead of looking straight at the camera. Those twigs are just the right color (colour?)