Luminous Landscape Forum

The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: stevieisballer on March 10, 2018, 11:03:26 am

Title: Tell me what y’all think
Post by: stevieisballer on March 10, 2018, 11:03:26 am

What do y’all think works?  What doesn’t work?
Thanks!
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Title: Re: Tell me what y’all think
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on March 10, 2018, 11:42:42 am

For my taste, there's too much foreground. However, the fatal flaw is that the white trees, which i assume are intended to be the focus of the image, are lost in the glare; it's particularly true of the one on the right.

Unless I'm missing the point, of course.

Jeremy