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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: BobDavid on December 16, 2017, 12:09:52 pm

Title: Scenes
Post by: BobDavid on December 16, 2017, 12:09:52 pm

close to home

Title: Re: Scenes
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on December 16, 2017, 01:01:39 pm

You haven't lost the touch, Bob. Both are very nice.
The first is really new ground for you; it sure isn't Florida!
The second is Classic BobDavid.

Eric

Title: Re: Scenes
Post by: 32BT on December 16, 2017, 01:13:13 pm

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on December 16, 2017, 01:01:39 pm

The second is Classic BobDavid.

Yes, instantly recognisable. Would have liked to see just a little more space on the left so the structure isn't leaning visually. Maybe just photoshop some extra black...

Title: Re: Scenes
Post by: BobDavid on December 16, 2017, 02:11:43 pm

Quote from: opgr on December 16, 2017, 01:13:13 pm

Yes, instantly recognisable. Would have liked to see just a little more space on the left so the structure isn't leaning visually. Maybe just photoshop some extra black...

I agree about the space on the left. There's more in the frame--just cropped too aggressively.

Title: Re: Scenes
Post by: Telecaster on December 16, 2017, 03:01:06 pm

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on December 16, 2017, 01:01:39 pm

You haven't lost the touch, Bob. Both are very nice.
The first is really new ground for you; it sure isn't Florida!
The second is Classic BobDavid.

Yep! #1 has a dynamic vibe I really like.

-Dave-