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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Alskoj on September 27, 2017, 07:53:02 am

Title: Lake Grasses
Post by: Alskoj on September 27, 2017, 07:53:02 am

I grabbed this while shooting a lake.  Wasn't even expecting it.  There are probably some issues with it, but I shot it "as is".  5 sec exposure shooting into indirect light.  What don't you like about it?
I tried uploading the tiff version but I get a security message when I do.

Title: Re: Lake Grasses
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 27, 2017, 09:09:36 am

Nothing not to like. I'm glad you spotted it.

Title: Re: Lake Grasses
Post by: francois on September 27, 2017, 10:10:33 am

Very nice and should also work well in B&W.

Title: Re: Lake Grasses
Post by: Alskoj on September 27, 2017, 07:05:47 pm

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 27, 2017, 09:09:36 am

Nothing not to like. I'm glad you spotted it.

Thanks!

Title: Re: Lake Grasses
Post by: Alskoj on September 27, 2017, 07:06:33 pm

Quote from: francois on September 27, 2017, 10:10:33 am

Very nice and should also work well in B&W.

Thanks and good idea about approaching this in B&W.

Title: Re: Lake Grasses
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on September 30, 2017, 01:43:40 pm

Quote from: francois on September 27, 2017, 10:10:33 am

Very nice and should also work well in B&W.

I'd be curious to see it in b&w, but I have a sneaking feeling that it won't work. I suspect the green is necessary.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Lake Grasses
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 30, 2017, 11:19:33 pm

I prefer the color version.

Title: Re: Lake Grasses
Post by: Alskoj on November 25, 2017, 08:31:39 pm

Some more grasses during a recent shoot.  Same lake.  Very early in the morning and very dead grasses.

(https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4540/38645099201_bd3e19ecca_b.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/21SWeBP)Grasses-32917-1-2 (https://flic.kr/p/21SWeBP) by Joseph Alsko (https://www.flickr.com/photos/20yearsusaf/), on Flickr

Title: Re: Lake Grasses
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on November 25, 2017, 09:19:48 pm

I really like the new one.
I also see two excellent images inside this one:  I feel the left and right halves could each stand by themselves.
Good stuff!

-Eric