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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: stamper on February 20, 2017, 05:54:12 am

Title: Tone Deaf
Post by: stamper on February 20, 2017, 05:54:12 am

Passable?

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: graeme on February 20, 2017, 06:09:20 am

Yes definitely.

I like the solid black silhouettes & shadows against the texture & pattern of the pavement.

The musician being in profile while the passers by are facing out of the frame is also effective.

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: RSL on February 20, 2017, 08:56:17 am

It's more than passable, Robert. Very nice.

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: BobDavid on February 20, 2017, 09:12:20 am

You've definitely mastered a style. Keep it going.

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on February 20, 2017, 09:15:34 am

Yes, definitely a keeper.

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on February 20, 2017, 12:12:29 pm

Outstanding work.

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on February 20, 2017, 02:02:10 pm

Well above passable.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: stamper on February 21, 2017, 03:57:34 am

Thanks for the positive feedback.

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: brianrybolt on February 21, 2017, 09:44:46 am

Quote from: stamper on February 20, 2017, 05:54:12 am

Passable?

More than passable but I don't like the black shape on the upper right.

Cheers,

Brian

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: stamper on February 21, 2017, 01:03:59 pm

Quote from: brianrybolt on February 21, 2017, 09:44:46 am

More than passable but I don't like the black shape on the upper right.

Cheers,

I thought about cropping out the black shape along with the person with the walker but then the balance of the image didn't look right.?

Brian

Title: Re: Tone Deaf
Post by: John R on February 21, 2017, 03:03:13 pm

It's a cool shot. It doesn't suffer too much because of the dark areas in the corners. The eye and the brain have to alternate between, graphic and people, so it has a lot of impact.

JR