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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: stamper on May 16, 2016, 06:49:02 am

Title: Cloister phobic
Post by: stamper on May 16, 2016, 06:49:02 am

Too much happening?

Title: Re: Cloister phobic
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 16, 2016, 08:40:29 am

Not too much at all. Seven individuals, and each one is in an interesting position. How mch did you have to pay them to position themselves in a balanced composition?   :D

Fine shot as usual.

Title: Re: Cloister phobic
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on May 16, 2016, 10:50:03 am

Steve McCurry's retoucher would probably remove that hand ;)

Title: Re: Cloister phobic
Post by: MattBurt on May 16, 2016, 01:23:20 pm

Nice, just the right amount going on I think.

Title: Re: Cloister phobic
Post by: John R on May 16, 2016, 01:45:57 pm

That's cool.

JR

Title: Re: Cloister phobic
Post by: francois on May 17, 2016, 10:41:59 am

The is a very fine shot, nothing but good things to say about this one.

Title: Re: Cloister phobic
Post by: RSL on May 17, 2016, 03:42:05 pm

It's a fine shot, Robert. I wouldn't change anything. The midtones are exactly right. They reveal enough and hide enough.

Title: Re: Cloister phobic
Post by: stamper on May 18, 2016, 03:34:46 am

Thanks for the feedback. I wasn't sure how this would be received because of the number of figures in it.