Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: BobDavid on March 12, 2016, 01:53:56 am
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From foggy dusk to clear night
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Another great set, Bob.
I'm curious about the two streaks in #2 and #3. In #3 I would guess that it was light from a ship or boat crossing, but the one little one in the second has me wondering.
Airplane? Meteor? Not that it matters.
Now even your titles are minimalist. ;)
Eric
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Love that middle one!
Rob C
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Yes, the middle one looks quite extra-terrestrial :)
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Very nice, Bob.
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I particularly like the second one, perhaps because the shoreline gives some context. In the third, I'd get rid of the streak: it looks out of place.
Jeremy
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I particularly like the second one, perhaps because the shoreline gives some context. In the third, I'd get rid of the streak: it looks out of place.
Jeremy
The streak is a ship on the horizon.
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Great set, Bob. And yes, I'd remove the streaks too.
Ever thought of publishing the series as a meditation book or collection of screensavers? I think I already suggested huge prints for galleries and home decoration.
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The streak is a ship on the horizon.
I thought that was what it was. You posted a shot recently that had a ship which was recognisably a ship, and I liked that a lot. This isn't: it's a streak, and I think it detracts from the image overall. But it's your shot and I don't presume to imagine that I'm "right".
Jeremy
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I have to join the chorus and say that the second is my favorite among this set. And echoing the extraterrestrial theme, the streak in the sky could be a spaceship. :)
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Completely agree with everything that has been said, especially hopes that you will consider publishing your work.