Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: drmike on February 28, 2016, 01:52:56 pm
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Could it be considered abstract? I don't know. But it's certainly blue :)
(https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1631/24944184709_6f0d24ea64_o.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/E1et5a)
Mike
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I think if you clone out the seams, the picture will have more impact.
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Well done.
Since you posted it in the Critique section, I'd suggest to push the shadows on the right even further into black, to balance the vertical rectangle.
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I wondered about the shadows on the right, I may have a go and see what I can do.
Not sure I want to lose the seams - I worry that it just becomes a desert of blue if they go?
Mike
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Definitely don't lose the seams, but Slobodan's right on darkening the shadows.
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Definitely don't lose the seams, but Slobodan's right on darkening the shadows.
+1
Rob C
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It needs the seams methinks.
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OK then if I want to darken the shadows on the right I think I can do the larger area but what about the railing? What I find happens is that I get a weird effect with fuzzy edges. What's they way to go about that?
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Looking at it again I think that the right hand should be left just as it is - it adds a third level of complexity with its shading. Darkening that area would make it too much like the left hand side of the image and lose that element of subtlety.
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OK then if I want to darken the shadows on the right I think I can do the larger area but what about the railing? What I find happens is that I get a weird effect with fuzzy edges. What's they way to go about that?
Don't even try the railing: it's a penumbra effect, as it should be; the solid can be done, though, and I think it would do no harm to an already good shot.
Rob C
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I see what you mean about keeping the seams. Sometimes my minimalist attitude throws me off.
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Looking at it again I think that the right hand should be left just as it is - it adds a third level of complexity with its shading. Darkening that area would make it too much like the left hand side of the image and lose that element of subtlety.
I agree. I've "previsualized" all of the suggestions and I don't think any of them would improve the original, which keeps growing on me every time I look at it.
I like the shadows and seams just the way they are.
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Thanks to everyone. What you may not be able to see at that size is that the bottom right dark area contains a wire mesh which would probably be clearer when printed. I am relieved that the consensus is moving towards leaving it as is - I feared that with my level of expertise I could only spoil it :)