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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jaemie on January 14, 2016, 05:23:22 am

Title: Market Ceiling - Revisited
Post by: Jaemie on January 14, 2016, 05:23:22 am

Annoying soda case removed, more emphasis on tones, depth, and structure.

(https://static1.squarespace.com/static/53add256e4b07cf991e61afd/565d2626e4b011b065256a84/56977642b204d50669933f45/1452766794572/SEA+Uwajimaya+Take+2+800.png?format=1500w)

Title: Re: Market Ceiling - Revisited
Post by: brandtb on January 15, 2016, 08:04:28 am

Beautiful colors, tones, subject. Again, maybe bring up deep shadows just a bit? Also, I might like to see a bit more at top...the uppermost horiz. pipe...don't know without seeing.

Title: Re: Market Ceiling - Revisited
Post by: Jaemie on January 16, 2016, 01:06:35 am

Thank you. Perhaps I will bring something wider next week - a 35 or even the 15.