Luminous Landscape Forum
Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: noknok on December 19, 2015, 05:45:30 pm
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Any advice on how to improve is appreciated (http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab157/graphite_subaru/18538302843_a4f15327f6_o_zpsztzabq8q.jpg)
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No image. How are you trying to display it?
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I was trying to host from flickr. I changed it to photobucket and it appears to be working now.
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spectacular scene and well captured.
Only, IMHO, those leaves (especially on the right) are a little distracting.
All the best,
sandro
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Disagree on the leaves. They balance the foliage on the left. A little green complements the sandstone.
Great image. Where is this?
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It is Double Arch in Arches National Park, Moab, Utah
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Any advice on how to improve is appreciated...
The image appears over-processed. Looks like a HDR, where highlights ended up muddy and dull and shadows opened too much, losing natural mid-day contrast. White balance appears too warm as well.
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The image appears over-processed. Looks like a HDR, where highlights ended up muddy and dull and shadows opened too much, losing natural mid-day contrast. White balance appears too warm as well.
I think Sobodan has raised several good points.
The white balance really is far too warm.
I would also try increasing the contrast.
I would not edit out any of the foliage - the green complements the orange rock very well.
Baseline composition and exposure appear fine.
Tony Jay
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There are a lot of things working in this photograph - well captured. Compositionally, I have trouble with the main focus - the arches - being so centrally placed. The natural eye movement is through the arches but my eye doesn't feel compelled to through and around the whole photograph, except for the leaves along the mid-right that are coming out of nowhere. The bottom leaves on the right are fine and are needed for balance, but not the ones halfway up.
I think Slobodan and Tony have already addressed the post-capture processing issues. In addition, consider where you are and when you're there... Given the time & location, there should be a greater feeling of harshness and definitely a colder tone overall. One might argue the colour of the rocks, being so warm, will cause a colour shift, but not in the sky which is clearly not a cold blue, but warmer as if at sunset, yet the shadows do not mirror that time of day.
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Try monochrome?
Jeremy
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Run it through Topaz Clarity
With your permission, I did:
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Judging from the pinkish clouds there is an obvious white balance issue, which can be addresses in post processing. The lack of contrast has already mentioned, although Les' correction is quite a bit too strong. Subtle micro contrast would be more suited. I also agree with Terry's remarks regarding subject placement.
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Run it through Topaz Clarity
With your permission, I did:
Can't say this is any "better"; with the vibrancy turned up, it is akin to those paintings on black velvet. But that might be my "push-button art" prejudice showing through.
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To me, the desert sky seems dull and the greens too bright. The shadows could be darker. No disagreements with the earlier comments.
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Run it through Topaz Clarity...
That would be like trying to make bread from an already baked cake :)
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Can't say this is any "better"; with the vibrancy turned up, it is akin to those paintings on black velvet. But that might be my "push-button art" prejudice showing through.
That would be like trying to make bread from an already baked cake :)
Push button or one click is the correct description. I did it just to point out an easy way out (however using a medium Topaz Clarity rather than their more drastic Adjust), and after all, as Slobodan mentions, I had to start with an already baked JPG. Now, I am also humble enough not to request hanging my rendition in a gallery.
In the end, we all apply our preferred kind and amount of processing. If you are fortunate to have your last name ending with "er", you could call those vivid renditions your "last name"+"izing", (i.e. Tender => tenderizing), but no such luck in my case. Perhaps it is also my slowly fading eyesight that keeps me pumping up those colors and contrast much more than I used to, and at the same time I find many other pictures too subtle and timid. In other words, I gravitate towards the Lik look.