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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: fdisilvestro on October 12, 2015, 06:10:33 am

Title: Teen
Post by: fdisilvestro on October 12, 2015, 06:10:33 am: Still undecided about the title for the picture,
Appreciate your comments,

(http://www.frankdisilvestro.com.au/img/s5/v117/p1545621380-5.jpg)

Regards
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: Tony Jay on October 12, 2015, 06:35:52 am: Well, while you figure out what to name this image the rest of us will sit back and admire it. ;D

Tony Jay
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: Diego Pigozzo on October 12, 2015, 07:14:27 am: Quote from: FranciscoDisilvestro on October 12, 2015, 06:10:33 am
Still undecided about the title for the picture,

What about "about to fly" as a title?
Looks like she's going to rise up and start growing any moment.

Quite a good picture.
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: Manoli on October 12, 2015, 07:42:21 am: Quote from: FranciscoDisilvestro on October 12, 2015, 06:10:33 am
Still undecided about the title for the picture,

Something short and apt.

How about :
'Young lady bored but suffering her Dad who's playing around with a D800 and yet another behemoth zoom lens'
or
'Look of Love on a Sunday'
or simply
'My daughter'
I assume she is your daughter, Francisco.
Compliments
M
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: fdisilvestro on October 12, 2015, 08:27:27 am: Thanks for your comments, Tony, Diego and Manoli

I like "about to fly" and "my daughter" so far (yes, you guessed right Manoli) ;)
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on October 12, 2015, 09:51:07 am: I like the way she is willing to look toward Dad's camera to help him out, but is not willing to try to put on any fancy pose for the camera.

It's a very fine portrait.
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: stamper on October 12, 2015, 09:53:04 am: Broody?

It isn't often you see an image on here with a lot of blacks and whites. A nice change and hopefully you can resist any advice to lighten it. I like it!
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: Bob_B on October 12, 2015, 10:26:54 am: I very much like your processing. As for a title, I suggest "Teen angst".
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: chuckn on October 12, 2015, 10:41:08 am: I think "teen" fits it perfectly. Nice photograph.

Chuck
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: fdisilvestro on October 13, 2015, 08:08:02 am: Thank you all for your kind comments!

Quote from: stamper on October 12, 2015, 09:53:04 am
It isn't often you see an image on here with a lot of blacks and whites. A nice change and hopefully you can resist any advice to lighten it. I like it!

I love images with lots of blacks and white. I agree that in this case I would not lighten it if suggested.

Regards
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: luxborealis on October 18, 2015, 08:19:26 am: Quote from: FranciscoDisilvestro on October 12, 2015, 06:10:33 am
Still undecided about the title for the picture,
Appreciate your comments,

(http://www.frankdisilvestro.com.au/img/s5/v117/p1545621380-5.jpg)

Regards

How about something in "their" language.... "Meh". At least that's the expression I see in her.
Title: Re: Teen
Post by: Bart_van_der_Wolf on October 18, 2015, 10:14:00 am: Quote from: luxborealis on October 18, 2015, 08:19:26 am
How about something in "their" language.... "Meh". At least that's the expression I see in her.

"Wassup" comes to mind, but then I do not know Frank's daughter and if it would fit her ways of expression.

Cheers,
Bart