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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Hidden Grid on September 27, 2015, 06:16:52 pm

Title: The Bridge!
Post by: Hidden Grid on September 27, 2015, 06:16:52 pm

(https://farm1.staticflickr.com/760/21683711696_3862fcc8ec_b.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/z37G3d)

Title: Re: The Bridge!
Post by: Larry Heath on September 27, 2015, 09:08:04 pm

Two things.

One, the horizon doesn’t seem quite level.
Two, the verticals of the closer tower are so far from parallel to the edge of the frame it is a bit visually disturbing.

Easy fixes.  Like this (https://farm1.staticflickr.com/695/21584771589_dc3f84f140_h.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/yTnAAi)21683711696_3862fcc8ec_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/yTnAAi) by Larry Heath (https://www.flickr.com/photos/lgheath/), on Flickr

Lovely image otherwise, I quite like it myself.