Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: BernardLanguillier on September 14, 2015, 08:27:12 pm
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Team,
Does this one work for you?
(https://farm6.staticflickr.com/5761/21383168695_31ff752552_o.jpg)
Cheers,
Bernard
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That dolphin feels like something is stuck in my eye. Lower might have worked better.
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I think the new couple will make a big splash! ;)
Don't you have a follow-up about fifteen seconds later?
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It is a strange picture--odd juxtaposition. I think if you crop the image right above the head of the person in the pool, the composition will come together. The tonality and the clarity of the couple is nice. I like the blurry dolphin-in-motion.
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Thanks for your kind inputs!
Cheers,
Bernard
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Certainly different.
I can see it becoming a thing and the wedding guys getting swamped with requests for dolphins... ;D
15 minutes later, it will go quiet again. :o
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It is a strange picture--odd juxtaposition. I think if you crop the image right above the head of the person in the pool, the composition will come together. The tonality and the clarity of the couple is nice. I like the blurry dolphin-in-motion.
That might work because now I'm first looking at the lady in the water then I go towards the couple with the dolphin being almost in the way. With the lady out the dolphin will be the foreground if that makes sense.
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I agree with Bob's suggested crop. I think it makes the image much stronger.
Jeremy
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I agree with Bob's suggested crop. I think it makes the image much stronger.
Jeremy
Me too.
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Yep, well spotted, cropping that way makes the image much better!
Thanks!
Cheers,
Bernard
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Yep, well spotted, cropping that way makes the image much better!
Thanks!
Cheers,
Bernard
Very Fellini...good company.
Peter
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Very Fellini...good company.
Very kind of you Peter. :-)
Cheers,
Bernard
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Fellini!!