Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: sgwrx on August 09, 2015, 09:02:28 pm
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i can barely do panning shots lower than 1/180th shutter speed, however out of the 200 i tried today there were 3 that grabbed my attention even though the subject is not sharp by any means. the more i look at this one example the more i like it. i added just a little saturation, tiny bit of clarity and pulled the levels down a tad in highlights and up like 4 or 5 in shadows. i think i'm going to study this one for a while to see how i might like it - so much for my earlier thread on adjusting the heck out of images! so sometimes what comes out of the camera is "how it felt" and i didn't even know it!
anyway, what are you thoughts. does it evoke anything or is it just a sham "can't shoot moving objects"?
-steve
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That shot is quite good. The background is nicely blurred, giving a sense that the car is moving very fast. And the slight blur of the car adds to the sense of speed. I think you've nailed it.
If the car were perfectly sharp, it would look like a composite: sharp photo put onto a blurred background. What you have looks realistic and effective to me.
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I agree, the slight blur on the car is very effective. Given that you are already being non sports in your approach if you see what I mean have you tried various B&W treatments? It may respond well to a super smooth conversion or a very gritty conversion.
Mike
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thank you both! i reviewed one of the other images of this car and the car is sharper and yeah, i just didn't feel anything when looking at it compared to this one. i haven't tried b&w but i can see that looking good too as long as i can get the tone of the car right. i do somewhat wish i could get the car coming more towards me, but then i would lost the bright/harsh sky.
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i do somewhat wish i could get the car coming more towards me, but then i would lost the bright/harsh sky.
And you'd lose the absolutely essential wavy lines. I think of the many car shots I've seen this one conveys speed and excitement more than most.
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thank you again! i've looked at this a few days now and continue to think it's probably the best shot i have from the day. there is one which is more crazy blurred and specifically up/down blur. when i first saw that picture, i thought it captured the incredible sound this car makes in visual. this one is more the speed.