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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on July 04, 2015, 02:04:46 pm

Title: arat
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on July 04, 2015, 02:04:46 pm

Comments?

Jeremy

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Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on July 04, 2015, 03:15:30 pm

I would open shadows just a tad.

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Post by: BobDavid on July 04, 2015, 06:53:17 pm

nice

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Post by: Paul Gessler on July 04, 2015, 08:16:42 pm

Very nice. I agree with Slobodan—consider bumping up the shadows just a touch. It doesn't need much, though.

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Post by: luxborealis on July 05, 2015, 12:59:52 pm

Quote from: kikashi on July 04, 2015, 02:04:46 pm

Comments?

Jeremy

Shadows up, as pointed out by Slobodan, but nail your white and black points first (in LR, shift+double-click on Whites then the same on Blacks). I'm willing to bet you could also bring the Exposure up a bit, too. While you're at it, reduce the Saturation or Vibrance. the sky, in particular, seems overly intense. I imagine the rocks are quite vibrant.

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Post by: francois on July 06, 2015, 04:12:29 am

I tried Terry's suggestions and it goes int he right direction… It's a very nice image to begin with.